From: Gamer (agnpgamer@home.com) Subject: [PW] Fora and you guys, evaluate this! Newsgroups: alt.games.nintendo.pokemon Date: 2000/04/27 I just wrote this, and I didn't spell check. I just need to know what you think, and if it isn't very bloody. "Eh, Pikachu! Wuzzup ma' man?" A shady looking character enclosed upon the lone Pikachu. "Pi? Pika pika!" The Pikachu munched on it's apple happily. "CRUNCH. Pi...." The Pikachu fell on the floor, a bloody mess, razor blades shoved through it's brain. "That's what ya get fer talkin ta stangers, ya dirty rat!" The shady character punted the yellow carcass into an alley, where a group of ratatta dragged it into a hole. Mission 1 "Aah... What a lovely day. Don't you think, Jake?" The girl tried to keep as perfect as possible, managing not to stutter. "Can't say I don't." Jakes Western accent mocked Tania's Californian Yuppie voice. "Japan is a great place, after all. Well, ta business." Jake pulled out a videoscreen from within his vest. A pre-recorded message appeared: "This is spider. Flies must bring me this man." The videoscreen showed the profile of a drunken male, looking very old and ragged. "Do not be decieved. He is able to change enirely within days. Spider suspects light armaments. Last time he was captured he had three pokémon." "Last time?" "Go figger." The videoscreen chirped on: "...Scyther, Jolteon, and Beedrill, all trained to be fast and powerful. If he is able to use his pokémon he will be very dangerous. Flies have three days to bring this man to spider." The videoscreen powered down, and Jake flipped it off. "Just like in the movies..." "Great. Did you catch his name?" Tania asked sarcasticly. "I guess, so we better get movin'." Jake pulled his pack around his shoulders. Meanwhile... "Go, Nidorino!" "Scyther, Jolteon, Beedrill, kill this thing!" "That's cheating! You can't-" The boy was cut short, as his nidorino fell in a smoking blaze. "Nido (sniff sniff) return!" "Oh no ya don't!" The boy's opponent pulled out a magnum, and blasted the ball out of the boy's hand. He then proceded to put 5 more shots into the Nidorino, and was about to shoot the boy when his gun clicked, showing he was out of ammo. The boy ran away, sobbing. Back to our heroes... "That man killed my Nidorino!" The boy pointed at a figure down the way, describing him to Tania. "Does he look like this?" Jake pulled out the videoscreen, revealing the photo taken of Jimmy Rogers, as the shady character was named. "That's him! That's him!" "DUCK!" Tania grabbed Jake and the boy and threw them to the side, as bullets whizzed past there ear. The man had reloaded, and was charging fast. "Sandslash, Graveler, Raticate, disable tht guy!" Jake threw all three of his pokéballs into the open. "Abra, Drowzee, Mr.Mime, take care of his pokémon!" The man, who was no quite close, accepted their challenge, and all three of his pokémon came to bear upon Jake's charging pokémon. "Jolteon, thunderbolt on the Rat! Beedrill, hyper beam! Scyther, agility!" "Raticate, hyper beam! Graveler, rock throw! Sandslash, dig, and try to score on that jolteon!" "RatiCATE..." "BeeDRILL!!!" The two powers met, though Raticate's ferocity as slightly more powerful. The Jolteon managed to score a serious hit on it with it's thunderbolt, sending it into the corner, knocked out. Golem, who had throw rocks at the scyther, managed to hit it in the head, stopping it in it's tracks, as the Scyther tried to figure out what had happened. The Sandslash attacked from beneath, and before it attacked Jolteon, it turned in the ground and went for Jimmy, it's main enemy. A low rumbling was heard. Jimmy ignored it, but it got louder. "What the... CRACK!" Terra seemed to shake underneath him, and he was on the ground, badly injured, with the Sandslash half a yard away. "No!" Jimmy pulled out his gun and fired 4 shots into the Sandslash, before reloading. "This can't be!" "SLASH!!!!" The Sandslash fell, the Beedrill pounding away. "Ah no!" Raticate, return! Sandslash, come back!" And what of Tania's pokémon? "ATTACK!!!" Tania lowered her hand, and the psychic blast of three powerful beings colided, fainting everything in it's proximity. The explosion was immense, and in the dust were Scyther, which was a blown apart blade and blood from it's stomach, Golem, who had curled up and has only been effected enough to knock it out cold, Jolteon, who was seriously damaged, and had sparks flying about. "No!!! The man pulled out a machine gun, and lay waste to all. He managed to shoot Jake in the leg, and make a lot of mess, but not much else. The gun clicked, and the man dropped it and ran, though in his fleeing his belt with the pokéballs on it dropped. Tania recalled all the pokémon on the battlefield, and put them all in her backpack. "Jake, are you alright?" "He.. Getting away... The pain!" "Let's get your out of here!" Tania pulled a medic kit out of her supply pack and bandaged Jake's wound. "There's always tomorrow." The next day... "Ready, Jake?" "Neva felt betta." Jake had a slight speech problem, as the drugs had yet to wear off. The life of a bounty hunter is never easy... TBC?