From: SaFciOR (mcaaron@friko.internet.pl) Subject: [PW!] Vince the Kid: Part 1: The story begins Newsgroups: alt.games.nintendo.pokemon Date: 2001-07-16 09:18:47 PST Hi, That's my first Pokewars! episode and I would be pleased if you tell me yur popinion about it. Prologue: Introduction and Part 2: the first challenge are in production. Maybe the beginning isn't too interesting, but the ction shuld develop :) Tell me if I should post it or keep it for myself. I know it's not ideal: my english isn't too good yet ( i write the pw! in English for group purposes - can you read Polish? :) ) And one question: How many time t takes you to 'produce' one part of a PW! story? I made the text below in about one or two hours. So... Pokewars! Vince the Kid Part 1: The story begins Written by: SaFciOR Vince woke up. After a short while, he realized that it was his tenth birthday. That day, he was able to get his own Pokemon and leave home to start his quest. He quickly dressed up and went downstairs. His mother was waiting for him. "It's your big day today." She said. Vince didn't answer. Tears showed in his eyes. "I don't want to leave you, mother." He cried. "You don't have to. But if you won't, you'll regret it. Go now and visit Professor Oak. He's waiting for you in the Radio Tower." Vince went out. He walked along the main street of Goldenrod, crossing the railway. Oak went out to say him good morning. "Hi, Kid" He said. "I've got three Pokemon now. You can choose one of them." They went into the tower. On the table, there were three Pokeballs. Vince picked one of them up. "It is Bellsprout. The other Pokemon are Poliwag and Meowth. You can consider your decision for a while. But if you want another Pokemon, you'll have to wait. And I can't promise you that I'll give you the Pokemon you ask me for." Oak said. "You can't give me a stronger Pokemon? They're all weak" Vince replied. "If you train them properly, they may grow into powerful creatures which could win every single battle. You can take one of them and come to me after a week. Then, you'll be allowed to exchange it for one of the Pokemon I'll show you then." Oak advised. "All right, I'll take the Poliwag now." "Are you sure?" Oak asked. "That decision is very important to you." "Oh, but you said I will be able to exchange it for another one." "Stop saying things like that or I won't give you Pokemon anymore. You better try your Pokemon." "Poliwag, go!" Vince shouted and he threw the Pokeball. But nothing happened. It rolled through the room and hit the wall. Vince looked at the professor. "You must learn much more about Pokemon. You shouldn't shout at your Pokemon when you throw the Pokeball. Your voice must sound as a challenge. Now try again," Oak explained. Vince lifted the Pokeball from the floor and said "go" again. "You did well this time." the professor said. And he was right. A blinding light flashed and Poliwag went out of his Pokeball. "Poleee, poleee" Poliwag cried. "Hello, Poliwag. This is your new master, Vince. Vince, that's your Poliwag. Take it home now. Your mother wants to see you before you leave." Oak said. "But. shouldn't you give me a Pokedex? I thought you give it to all young trainers like me. And what about the Pokegear?" Vince was impatient. "Ah, yes, here it is - the Pokedex. You know how to use it, don't you?" Oak handed him the little machine. "Yes, but." "Ah, you want to ask me a question about it?" Oak asked. "No. I was just going to ask you about the Pokegear." "Well, you see." Oak said. "I don't have any at the moment. When you come next week, it will be available. Now go home. Your mother wants to say you goodbye before you go."