From: Shin Daitooryoo <daitooryoo@att.net> Subject: [PW!] I wanna be a pokeyman master! Date: Sunday, December 05, 1999 1:01 AM In the town of Celadon, lives a pretty Asian girl with a beautiful smile. She is named Julie and turned 13 about a week ago, Julie was sitting in her room on a bright Celadon day. The TV was on, like always, the local network was airing a documentary about the pokémon trainer. Julie watched and wondered what a pokémon adventure would be like till the end of the show, once the film was over the monotone narrator said, "At the beginning and end of a journey, the trainer will find: love, learning, and adventure." Julie giggled softly and looked into her ceiling, "If only I had love and adventure, I'd be ten times happier than I am already!" The pokémon trainer film sparked a desire in her, from this day on, she wanted to live that adventure. A day, two days, three days, four days, five days passed. Julie had finally convinced her father to go on a journey, but her mother suggested she start in Celadon and gain some pointers from the local gym. Celadon was notorious for the game center, she had collected lots of coins, enough for a Porygon. The same day she was allowed to wander off into the world of pokémon, she bought that Porygon. Julie hugged Porygon, but it poked her smooth skin with his sharp edges. Porygon could only repeat the word "gon", Julie had considered it a form of giggling. She then decided to name him, Giggles. Porygon was confused, how could a tough and masculine pokemon be called Giggles?! Yet Julie was happy with him, and that pleased Porygon more than anything. Julie knew that she could not live with one pokémon, so she did the only thing she could do to get another one, capture a pokémon. After buying the so called 'Great Ball', she spotted a small lake near the gate of Celadon. It was about 3:00 P.M, Julie ran back home and showed her dad a Porygon. The crystalline pokémon went back into his pokéball and Julie ran off with a small lime thing under her arm. Once she was back at the lake, it was about 5:00, the sun's danger was about over. Julie pulled back her hair and got completely naked, quickly putting on the swimsuit she held under her arm, she dived into the water without hesitation. Julie loved the water and swiftly made it to the bottom of the lake, she spotted a lying fish on the floor of the lake. Julie wondered why it was lying there, she thought, "Wait a minute, it's lying on the ground, I can capture it!!" Julie took out the great ball, she yelled, "Pokeyball gooo!" The red and silver orb slowly got to the fish, it opened up, the fish was sucked in. Ding, one ding, two ding, three ding. The fish was securely captured and Julie took the chance to play in the water a bit. She swam up to the surface to get some air, her face was out of the water and she could still see her clothes lying on the ground. Julie caressed her body in admiration, if there was one thing she was proud of, it was her delicate frame and silky hair. She finally jumped back out of the water, and once again put on her clothes as fast as she could, hoping no one would pass by and stare at her. Julie ran back home, it was about 8:00 now, she ate dinner and took a shower. Julie was in the bathroom, she was naked and in front of a mirror. "This is me?" Julie ran her hands down her chest, then rubbed her eyes. "Ohh my god, what tha?!" She took another look at her chest and noticed it was rounding out and pointing forward a bit, Julie had now realized she was growing up, and that this journey would be the start of it all. She smiled at the mirror sweetly, "I'm becoming, a young lady." Julie took a good look at herself, a look she hadn't taken in along time. Julie noticed the straight hips of her previous years were curving a little bit, she began to see very fine hair in places Julie never saw before, and knew for sure she was changing. After putting on her clothes, Julie decided not to tell her mother, she didn't want to get her all worked up before she left. Now in pajamas, she went under her sheets and rested on her bed. "To think, I'm becoming something else, why do physical changes have to start messing with my way of thinking?" Julie fell asleep, in her dreams, she saw a gleaming blade that appeared in her past dreams. A mental voice echoed in her mind, "It'll come soon, you'll become, and it will all change." == So what did you guys think is this any good, better than my other work? Is there anything I should change? Any grammar errors? Spelling?